I chose this piece of writing to share because I believe I used good sentence fluency and also word choice. This day would have to go down in my history books, as one of the best days in my life because now, I really do believe that you can do anything you put your mind to and make that dream a reality.
As I grabbed out my hockey stick and pulled up my socks. I started to get a bit nervous. Not knowing what was about to happen. For all I know I could completely humiliate myself in front of five of Australia’s best women hockey players. 5 minutes pass then an hour I haven’t managed to make a full of myself just yet and look like I don’t know what I’m doing. The training was unfortunately over. But there was still time to get photos and smile for the camera. We also had the opportunity to get some signatures from the five Hockeyroo’s players we met. At this point I was jumping for joy I got my hockey stick signed and got photos with four of the girls
Anna Flanagan
Georgie Parker
Emily Smith &
Rachael Lynch
I was really thankful for this moment and it really boosted my confidence in knowing you can do anything you put your mind to and keep working and that dream can happen.

What a great opportunity- you may be a Hockeyroo one day!!